The Terrible Jar
Once there was a normal middle aged
mother named Sandra with 2 children who were about to move out. The next day it
was time for her children to move out!!!!
The mother kissed them good bye, she went inside and she found a present
saying to Sandra from Anonymous. She wondered who gave it to her. When she
opened it was a jar, a black jar. She called her son, He said “I don’t know
about any black jar mum.” “hmmmm” said Sandra. So she decided to open the jar
but when she lifted the lid she was killed!!!!
Hi Jaedyn,
ReplyDeleteYou've written quite a tragic story! It leaves me wondering what was in the jar that killed her. I'm also wondering if her son was lying? It makes me want to read what happens next. Keep writing!
Jilanne (Team 100)